Enjoyed the listen...It's got some very interesting ideas in there, but for my ear it needs a little bit more textural and timbral variation.
Only a couple of brief moments where the (mainly ensemble) strings make way for the woodwind - needs more ebb and flow and possibly more single instrument / solo entries / different articulations in the strings as well...possibly splitting them up into violins / viola / cellos / basses a little more?
Thematically, there was some continuity of melodic ideas it was hard to pick out any clear thread of development?
Mix-wise - it's very listenable, but the strings do have slightly harsh edge to them in the upper frequencies and are possibly a tad too 'dry' overall?
Only a couple of brief moments where the (mainly ensemble) strings make way for the woodwind - needs more ebb and flow and possibly more single instrument / solo entries / different articulations in the strings as well...possibly splitting them up into violins / viola / cellos / basses a little more?
Thematically, there was some continuity of melodic ideas it was hard to pick out any clear thread of development?
Mix-wise - it's very listenable, but the strings do have slightly harsh edge to them in the upper frequencies and are possibly a tad too 'dry' overall?
Statistics: Posted by ChameleonMusic — Mon Nov 25, 2024 9:02 pm